Dear Mike

    Dear Mike,
    I am glad to receive your letters.I am writing to tell you that I want to be a teacher in the future.Some people like be a singer,some people like be a actor.As for me,my favorite is be a teacher.Here are the reasons.
    First of all,be a teacher is very meaningful,it can help me realize my self-worth and help me with my studies.In addition,it can make me happy and teach me some new things.Last but not least,I hope I can become a teacher,because me can spend more time with my family and friends.
    As a result,as far as I am concernd,I prefer be a teacher.I am looking forward to meeting you.I wish you and you family good health and happiness.

                                                                                                                                       yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                  LiKe

### Score: 13-18 (Third Tier)

### Evaluation:

1. **Content:**
   - The letter addresses the main topic of wanting to be a teacher and provides some reasons for this choice.
   - The content is generally clear but lacks depth in explanation.

2. **Structure:**
   - The letter has a basic structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
   - Transitions between points could be smoother.

3. **Language Use:**
   - There are notable grammatical errors (e.g., "like be a singer" should be "like being a singer").
   - Singular/plural inconsistencies (e.g., "you family" should be "your family").
   - Word choice errors, such as "me can spend more time" should be "I can spend more time".
   - Some awkward phrasing and errors that affect clarity ("As a result, as far as I am concernd, I prefer be a teacher").

4. **Suggestions for Improvement:**
   - Correct the grammatical errors related to verb forms and pronoun use.
   - Use smoother transitions between ideas.
   - Expand on the reasons for choosing to be a teacher to add depth to the argument.
   - Check spelling and punctuation, such as "concernd" which should be "concerned", and "yours sincerely" should be correctly aligned.
   - Revise awkward phrases for clearer expression.

Overall, while the letter completes the basic task, refining language use and providing more detailed explanations would improve the quality.