Self-study English

Self-study is very popular way to learn something.Nowadays many people choose this way to improve themseves,you can learn something on the Internet as well as on the book,etc.
     I am interested in self-study and I really enjoy it.But there is some difficulties in self-study.For example,we cannot understand many difficult thing only by ourselves.In addition,when we learn some new knowledge and words,We find it very diffculty,but self-study is very meaningful for us.further more,it not only helps us improve our learn ability,bu also it brings us a very important learn way.
    So,I prefer self-study.

### 评分与评语

#### 总体评价
这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了重要的内容要点，但存在一些语言错误和表达不清楚的地方。文章结构较为松散，语法和词汇使用有待提高。

#### 得分：16分

### 详细评分标准

- **第一档 (25-30分)：** 不符合，未能圆满完成任务。
- **第二档 (19-24分)：** 不符合，语言错误较多，影响理解。
- **第三档 (13-18分)：** 基本符合，提及了关键内容要点，但存在不少语言错误。
- **第四档 (7-12分)：** 不符合，文章整体尚可，但部分内容不清晰。
- **第五档 (1-6分)：** 不符合，虽有些错误，但不至于严重影响理解。

### 不足之处与建议

1. **拼写和标点符号：**
   - "themseves" 应为 "themselves"。
   - "diffculty" 应为 "difficulty"。
   - "bu" 应为 "but"。
   - "further more" 应为 "furthermore"（合成一个词）。
   - 注意句子结尾的标点符号缺失，如第一段的最后一句。

2. **语法和词汇：**
   - **语法错误**：
     - "there is some difficulties" 应为 "there are some difficulties"。
     - "many difficult thing" 应为 "many difficult things"。
     - "when we learn some new knowledge and words, We find it very diffculty" 句子应重新组织，如 "when we learn new knowledge and words, we find it very difficult."
   - **词汇使用**：
     - "the book" 改为 "books" 更为恰当。
     - "improve our learn ability" 应为 "improve our learning ability"。

3. **表达和结构：**
   - 第一段和第二段之间缺乏自然过渡，可以加以改进。
   - 增加具体例子会使文章更加生动和具有说服力，如介绍一次成功的自学经历。

4. **书写格式：**
   - 文章需要更好地分段，每个段落表达一个明确的观点或主题。

### 改进后的示例

1. Self-study English
   
2. Self-study is a very popular way to learn something. Nowadays many people choose this method to improve themselves; you can learn on the Internet as well as through books, etc.
   
3. 
   
4. I am interested in self-study and I really enjoy it. However, there are some difficulties in self-study. For example, we cannot understand many difficult things by ourselves. In addition, when we learn new knowledge and words, we find it very difficult. But self-study is very meaningful for us. Furthermore, it not only helps us improve our learning ability, but also brings us a very important learning method.
   
5. 
   
6. In conclusion, I prefer self-study.

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通过改进拼写、语法和结构，你的作文将会更加清晰和流畅，得分也会相应提高。