How to learn English well

    English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
     Learnning English is very difficult for us ,so we must to learn well it.I have much sccessful expreance to share with your.Firstly,you can listen to a lots of English words.In addition, you also can speech English in our daily life,it not olny helps us improve English express abilities,but also can improve to us learn abilities and so on. what"s more,we need to read and write English words and setances,For example,every morning we usually reading English affer us get up,and need to read  much words,as it can help to us learn English well,so we must to hard work to learn English.finally,I hope to us can make a progress score.

### Score: 10

### Feedback:

This essay is primarily in the fourth档 (7-12分), as it completes only a part of the task specified. It does mention some key points but fails to clearly express many content points. The essay suffers from numerous grammatical errors and inappropriate vocabulary usage, which affects comprehension.

#### Strengths:
1. The essay addresses the topic by providing suggestions on how to learn English better.
2. Some variety in sentence structure is attempted, though not effectively executed.

#### Areas for Improvement:
1. **Repetition**: The first two sentences are identical and redundant. They should be combined or rephrased.
2. **Grammar and Syntax**: There are multiple grammatical errors that affect the readability and clarity of the essay. Some examples include:
   - “Learnning” should be “Learning.”
   - “must to learn well it” should be “must learn it well.”
   - “much sccessful expreance” should be “many successful experiences.”
   - “speech English” should be “speak English.”
   - “express abilities” should be “expressive abilities.”
   - “improve to us learn abilities” should be “improve our learning abilities.”
   - “setances” should be “sentences.”
   - “affter” should be “after.”
   - “to hard work” should be “work hard.”

3. **Vocabulary Usage**:
   - Phrases like “you can listen to a lots of English words” and “setances” are awkward and incorrect.
   - The use of “make a progress score” is confusing.

4. **Structure and Coherence**:
   - There is a lack of logical flow in the essay. Ideas should be better organized into coherent paragraphs.
   - Transitions between ideas are missing or ineffective, making the essay difficult to follow.

5. **Punctuation**:
   - There are several punctuation errors, such as missing commas, incorrect apostrophes, and incorrect use of quotation marks.

6. **Examples and Elaboration**:
   - The suggestions provided are too vague and not sufficiently elaborated. Specific examples and more detailed explanations would strengthen the essay.

#### Revised Version:

How to Learn English Well

English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.

Learning English is very difficult for us, so we must strive to learn it well. I have many successful experiences to share with you. Firstly, you can listen to a lot of English words and phrases. Additionally, you should speak English in your daily life. This not only helps improve your ability to express yourself in English but also enhances your overall learning abilities.

Moreover, reading and writing English sentences regularly is crucial. For instance, reading English texts every morning after waking up and learning new words can significantly help in mastering the language. Finally, consistent hard work is essential if we want to make progress in our English studies.

By following these steps, I believe we can all achieve better scores and improve our English proficiency.

王艳 发表于 2024-8-28 19:20
### Score: 10

### Feedback:

翻译成中文

黄金城SA 发表于 2024-08-28 19:21
翻译成中文

如何学好英语

英语对我们来说既重要又有用。那我们该怎样学好英语呢？这里有我的一些建议。

学习英语对我们来说非常困难，所以我们必须努力学好它。我有很多成功的经验想与大家分享。首先，你可以多听一些英语单词和短语。另外，你应该在日常生活中说英语。这不仅有助于提高你用英语表达的能力，还能增强你的整体学习能力。

此外，定期阅读和写作英语句子也是至关重要的。例如，每天早上起床后读英语文章并学习新单词，这对掌握这门语言有很大帮助。最后，如果我们想在英语学习中取得进步，持续的努力是必不可少的。

通过遵循这些步骤，我相信我们都可以取得更好的成绩，提高我们的英语水平。

不是的意思是把上面的点评翻译成中文，有点看不懂

黄金城SA 发表于 2024-08-28 19:24
不是的意思是把上面的点评翻译成中文，有点看不懂 ...

### 得分：10分

### 反馈：

这篇作文主要位于第四档（7-12分），因为它只完成了部分规定的任务。虽然提到了一些关键点，但未能清楚表达很多内容要点。作文中存在大量语法错误和不当的词汇使用，影响了理解。

#### 优点：
1. 作文通过提供如何更好地学习英语的建议，回应了题目。
2. 尝试了多种句型结构，尽管未能有效执行。

#### 改进建议：
1. **重复**：前两句话完全相同且冗余，应该合并或重写。
2. **语法和句法**：存在多处语法错误，影响了可读性和清晰度。例如：
   - “Learnning” 应改为 “Learning”。
   - “must to learn well it” 应改为 “must learn it well”。
   - “much sccessful expreance” 应改为 “many successful experiences”。
   - “speech English” 应改为 “speak English”。
   - “express abilities” 应改为 “expressive abilities”。
   - “improve to us learn abilities” 应改为 “improve our learning abilities”。
   - “setances” 应改为 “sentences”。
   - “affter” 应改为 “after”。
   - “to hard work” 应改为 “work hard”。

3. **词汇使用**：
   - 短语如 “you can listen to a lots of English words” 和 “setances” 显得尴尬且不正确。
   - 使用 “make a progress score” 令人困惑。

4. **结构与连贯性**：
   - 作文缺乏逻辑顺序，应该将想法更好地组织成连贯的段落。
   - 段落之间缺乏过渡，使得文章难以理解。

5. **标点符号**：
   - 存在多处标点错误，如漏掉逗号、错误的撇号使用和引号使用不当。

6. **举例和详细说明**：
   - 提供的建议过于模糊，没有充分展开。具体的例子和更详细的解释会使文章更有说服力。

#### 修改后的版本：

如何学好英语

英语对我们来说既重要又有用。我们该怎样学好它呢？这里有我的一些建议。

学习英语很困难，因此我们必须努力学习好它。我有一些成功的经验想与你分享。首先，你可以多听一些英语单词和短语。另外，你应该在日常生活中说英语。这不仅有助于提高你用英语表达的能力，还能增强你的整体学习能力。

此外，定期阅读和写作英语句子是至关重要的。例如，每天早上起床后读英语文本并学习新单词，可以显著帮助掌握这门语言。最后，如果我们想在英语学习中取得进步，持续的努力是必不可少的。

通过遵循这些步骤，我相信我们都可以取得更好的成绩，提高我们的英语水平。