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My Goal for Next Year
Recently, more and more people are talking about goal.From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that the goals can halp us make use of the time next year. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.The first point that I want to mention is that people has goals will do everything with happle,and that is because do something will do better.
What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that the goal is people more on the skll. which is because seccess is not lose the goal.
As for me,my goal for next year is to improve my English,especially my reading and writing ability.In order to achieve this goal ,I plan to try my best in the following aspects .Fist of all,I will spend two houts studying English every day .Secondly I will writ daily .In the word ,I will make achere my goal.

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My Goal for Next Year
Recently, more and more people are talking about goals. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that goals can help us make use of time next year. The reasons why I believe so are listed below. The first point that I want to mention is that people who have goals will do everything with happiness, and that is because doing something with a goal will be better.
What's more, it’s easier for us to understand that setting a goal focuses more on skills, which is because success is not losing sight of the goal. As for me, my goal for next year is to improve my English, especially my reading and writing abilities. In order to achieve this goal, I plan to try my best in the following aspects. First of all, I will spend two hours studying English every day. Secondly, I will write daily. In the end, I will achieve my goal.

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批改意见：
1. 注意单词拼写和语法错误，如"goal"、“help”、“happy”、“hours”、“writing”等。
2. 语句结构需要改进，有些表达不够清晰连贯。
3. 字数较少，建议在每个观点中展开更多的论述，使文章更加充实。