My fovrite sports

My fovrite sports

Nowadays more and more people talking about sports is popular and trendy in my lives.So as far as I am concerned sports is important in my family. So l love sports very much.

The main reasons are listed as follows:

In the first place, some people like sports that it is helping a healthy body for us.

In the second place,when i was little, I don’t know what is sports, more often than not my mother teought me basketball and ping-pong with my friend.after,i grew up ,i want to a preson like my mather teach my children.

Last but not the least,my fovrite sports is basketball,it is help eating many food by a healthy bady.and help my family that happiness.

To sum up .sports is not only interesting but also give me very happy.So like it.

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1)评分原则

本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。

阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言错误的数量扣分。

评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。

拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。

如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次

2)评分标准

第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
• 语言运用较为准确、恰当
  

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
• 语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解
  

第三档    13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务

• 提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
• 运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
• 存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解
  

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

• 遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇单调。
• 语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解
  

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

• 明显遗漏内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇极单调
• 语言错误很多，严重影响理解
  

0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关

Nowadays more and more people talking about sports is popular and trendy in my lives.So as far as I am concerned sports is important in my family. So l love sports very much.

The main reasons are listed as follows:

In the first place, some people like sports that it is helping a healthy body for us.

In the second place,when i was little, I don’t know what is sports, more often than not my mother teought me basketball and ping-pong with my friend.after,i grew up ,i want to a preson like my mather teach my children.

Last but not the least,my fovrite sports is basketball,it is help eating many food by a healthy bady.and help my family that happiness.

To sum up .sports is not only interesting but also give me very happy.So like it.

首先，这篇作文在表达上存在一些语法错误和拼写错误，需要加以修正。其次，文章内容较为简单，没有展开具体的论述或例子来支撑作者喜爱运动的观点。最后，整体结构有些混乱，缺乏逻辑连贯性。

以下是对作文进行修改和评分的建议：

Nowadays, more and more people are talking about how sports have become popular and trendy in our lives. As for me, sports hold great importance in my family, and I love sports very much for several reasons.

Firstly, engaging in sports helps maintain a healthy body. Secondly, when I was young, I didn't understand the importance of sports until my mother taught me how to play basketball and ping-pong with my friends. As I grew up, I aspired to be like my mother and pass on the love for sports to my children.

My favorite sport is basketball because it not only promotes good health by burning calories but also brings happiness and unity to my family. In conclusion, sports are not only interesting but also bring me immense joy.

评分建议：
根据作文内容的完整度、语法准确性和表达清晰度，可以给出以下评分：

第三档：13-18分
- 作文基本完成了任务，提及了关键内容要点；
- 语法结构和词汇基本满足要求，但仍存在一些错误；
- 表达清晰度有待提升，需要更多具体的论述和例子来支撑观点。

最终建议：
为了提高作文的质量，建议在写作时注意语法的准确性和连贯性，增加具体的例子和详细描述，使得文章更加生动和具有说服力。