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Recently, more and more people are talking about dream trip. From my respective, it is totally undoubted that Shenzhen is the most want want to trip city on the world. Here's why I think so.

  

本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。

阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言错误的数量扣分。

评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。

拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。

如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次

2)评分标准

第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
• 语言运用较为准确、恰当
  

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
• 语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解
  

第三档    13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务

• 提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
• 运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
• 存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解
  

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

• 遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇单调。
• 语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解
  

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

• 明显遗漏内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇极单调
• 语言错误很多，严重影响理解
  

0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关First of all, I want to express that Shenzhen is a dynamic city, because Shenzhen has more than 40 years of history and a lot of young people. More importantly, it is easier for us to understand that Shenzhen allows us to maintain a positive attitude, because its technology and culture are developing very fast.

All in all, Shenzhen is the city I most want to travel to in the world.

As a university professor, I appreciate your interest in discussing the topic of dream trips. Shenzhen, indeed, holds great potential as a top destination for travelers. The city's rapid development over the past 40 years has transformed it into a dynamic and vibrant metropolis. Its rich history and diverse population make it an exciting place to explore.

One of the key factors that make Shenzhen a desirable destination is its technological advancements. As the first Special Economic Zone in China, Shenzhen has become a hub for innovation and entrepreneurship. It is home to numerous technology companies, including some of the world's leading tech giants. Visitors can witness firsthand the latest developments in areas such as artificial intelligence, telecommunications, and e-commerce.

Furthermore, Shenzhen's cultural scene is also thriving. The city boasts numerous art galleries, museums, and theaters, offering a wide range of cultural experiences. From traditional Chinese art to contemporary exhibitions, there is something for everyone. Additionally, Shenzhen hosts various cultural festivals throughout the year, showcasing the diversity and richness of Chinese traditions.

Moreover, Shenzhen's geographical location adds to its appeal. Situated on the southern coast of China, the city benefits from beautiful coastal scenery and pleasant weather throughout the year. Visitors can enjoy picturesque beaches, hike in scenic mountains, or explore nearby historical sites.

Lastly, Shenzhen's accessibility makes it even more attractive. The city is well connected through an efficient transportation network, including an international airport and high-speed train services. This allows travelers to easily reach and explore other parts of China, including nearby Hong Kong and Macau.

In conclusion, as a university professor, I believe Shenzhen offers a compelling mix of technological advancements, cultural experiences, natural beauty, and accessibility. It is no wonder that many people consider it as their dream trip destination.