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                 How to Overcome Difficulties in My English Studies?
    Recently, more and more people are talking about How to Overcome Difficulties in English Studies. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that I like learning English very much, I hope I can learn english well. I have some ways to overcome learn English.
    Firstly, learning a language is not only about learning the words and grammar, but also about understanding the culture of the country.
    Secondly, I believe you should know this at the end of my letter, that is I suggest that you start by learning the grammar and language structure. Then, you can create an environment for yourself by chatting with friends in Chinese, listening to Chinese songs and so on.
    Lastly, we need not only  not afraid of difficulties spirit, but also unremitting efforts.


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1)评分原则

本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。

阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言错误的数量扣分。

评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。

拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。

如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次

2)评分标准

第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
语言运用较为准确、恰当

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解

第三档    13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务

提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
语法结构和词汇单调。
语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

明显遗漏内容要点
语法结构和词汇极单调
语言错误很多，严重影响理解

0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关

评分：第二档 19-24分

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How to Overcome Difficulties in My English Studies?

Recently, more and more people are talking about How to Overcome Difficulties in English Studies. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that I like learning English very much, I hope I can learn English well. I have some ways to overcome learn English.

Recently, more and more people have been discussing how to overcome difficulties in English studies. From my perspective, it is undeniable that I am very interested in learning English and I hope to become proficient in it. I have some strategies to overcome these difficulties.

Firstly, learning a language is not only about learning the words and grammar, but also about understanding the culture of the country.

Firstly, learning a language is not just about memorizing words and grammar rules, but also about understanding the culture of the country.

Secondly, I believe you should know this at the end of my letter, that is I suggest that you start by learning the grammar and language structure. Then, you can create an environment for yourself by chatting with friends in Chinese, listening to Chinese songs and so on.

Secondly, as a concluding remark, I suggest starting with learning grammar and sentence structures. Then, you can create an immersive environment by chatting with friends in English, listening to English songs, and so on.

Lastly, we need not only not afraid of difficulties spirit, but also unremitting efforts.

Lastly, we should not only have the spirit of fearlessness towards difficulties, but also make unremitting efforts.

Overall, your essay provides some good points on how to overcome difficulties in English studies. However, there are some language errors and awkward phrasing that affect the clarity of your ideas. I suggest paying more attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve the overall fluency and coherence of your writing. Keep up the good work!