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                                                    How to Overcome Difficulties in My English Studies?
    Recently, more and more people are talking about How to Overcome Difficulties in English Studies. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that I like learning English very much. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
    Firstly, learning a language is not only about learning the words and grammar, but also about understanding the culture of the country.
    Lastly, I believe you should know this at the end of my letter, that is I suggest that you start by learning the grammar and language structure. Then, you can create an environment for yourself by chatting with friends in Chinese, listening to Chinese songs and so on.


请按照作文类型以及评分标准对上面的作文进行打分，并指出不足

1)评分原则

本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。

阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言错误的数量扣分。

评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。

拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。

如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次

2)评分标准

第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
语言运用较为准确、恰当

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解

第三档    13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务

提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
语法结构和词汇单调。
语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

明显遗漏内容要点
语法结构和词汇极单调
语言错误很多，严重影响理解

0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关

How to Overcome Difficulties in My English Studies?

Recently, more and more people are talking about how to overcome difficulties in English studies. From my perspective, I have a great interest in learning English. There are several reasons why I believe so.

Firstly, learning a language is not just about memorizing vocabulary and grammar rules. It also involves understanding the culture of the country where the language is spoken. For example, by learning English, I can gain a deeper understanding of Western culture and ideas.

Secondly, I believe that starting with grammar and language structure is crucial for English learners. By having a solid foundation in grammar, I can better understand how sentences are formed and how to express myself accurately.

Finally, creating an English environment for myself is also an effective way to improve my English skills. This can be done by chatting with friends in English, listening to English songs, watching English movies, and so on. Immersing myself in the language will help me become more fluent and confident in using English.

In conclusion, despite the challenges that come with learning English, I am passionate about overcoming them. By understanding the cultural context, mastering grammar, and creating an English environment, I believe I can overcome difficulties in my English studies.

评分：第三档 13-18分

总体印象：
对于题目要求的内容，作者提及了学习英语的兴趣和热情，并列举了几个解决困难的方法。文章结构清晰，语言运用基本正确。

具体评价：
文章对于如何学好英语的观点和方法有一定的补充和阐述，措辞较为准确恰当。但是，文章中存在一些语法错误和句子表达不够流畅的问题，也有些地方需要进一步细化论述。

建议改进：
- 在提到英语学习的方法时，可以具体介绍一些有效的学习策略和技巧，以帮助读者更好地理解和运用。
- 避免重复使用某些词汇，比如"learning English"可以用更多的同义词或表达方式来替换。
- 注意语法错误，特别是主谓一致、时态和词形变化方面的错误。

加油，继续努力！