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                                                  Let's Save Water
    Recently, more and more people are talking about save water. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that water is very important for living things .The reason why I believe so are listed as below.
    The first point that I want to mention is that we can’t live without water, and that is because we need to drink water and wash with water. If there is no water, our life will be terrible. Crops and vegetables will die. What is more , it is easier for us to understand that we must save water, which is  we can save water by turning off running taps. We can use shower instead of bath.
    From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that water is very important for living things. After all, we can’t live without water and we must save water.
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Let's Save Water

Recently, more and more people are talking about saving water. From my perspective, it is undoubted that water is very important for all living things. There are several reasons why I believe so.

Firstly, we cannot live without water because we need it to drink and wash. Without water, our lives would be terrible. Furthermore, crops and vegetables would die without water. It is easy for us to understand the importance of saving water, as we can do so by turning off running taps and using showers instead of baths.

In conclusion, water is essential for all living things. We must save water because we cannot survive without it.

评分：第三档，15-18分。该作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了关键内容要点。但存在一些语言错误，如文章中几次出现的"undoubted"应改为"undoubtedly"，"is"和"that"之间需要加一个逗号。另外，文章结构比较简单，没有过多的阐述和论证。需要更多的细节和例子来支持主题。

总体印象：文章表达了观点，但语言运用不够准确和流畅。需要注意语法错误和句子结构的问题。同时，可以加入更多的相关信息来丰富内容。