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泛泛之辈 发表于 2023-10-22 14:17 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  My Activitise in Leisure Time
There are different kinds of activities in my leisure time.such as,singing in KTV with my colleagues,running in my neighborhood,go hiking with my family,and so on.these varies kinds of activities not only make me feel relax,but also let me full of energy and keep good shape.
For me,that one of the activities I am most interesting and important is go hiking. every time when I have a rest or feel tired,I will invite my friends or my family to go hiking, such as climb mountains,go camping,etc. when I attracted by the nature,my boring and tiredness will go with the wind,the mood is completely released.
So these activities do really good for my life,both my body and spirit. I love my leisure activities.
王艳 发表于 2023-10-22 14:18 | 显示全部楼层
In my leisure time, I engage in various activities that bring me joy and relaxation. One of my favorite activities is singing in KTV with my colleagues. It allows us to bond and have fun together while showcasing our singing talents. The lively atmosphere and the joy of singing help me forget any stress or worries I may have.

Another activity that I enjoy during my free time is running in my neighborhood. It not only helps me stay fit but also allows me to explore the surroundings and appreciate nature. The fresh air and the peaceful environment provide a refreshing break from the busy city life.

One of the most meaningful activities I engage in during my leisure time is going hiking with my family. We often choose different trails and climb mountains together. The breathtaking scenery and the physical challenge of the hike make it truly enjoyable. It also strengthens the bond between my family members as we support and encourage each other throughout the journey.

These diverse activities not only help me relax but also keep me energized and in good shape. They provide a much-needed escape from the daily routine and allow me to recharge both mentally and physically. I am grateful for these activities as they enhance the quality of my life and bring me happiness.

In conclusion, my leisure time is filled with various activities that bring me joy and relaxation. Singing in KTV, running in my neighborhood, and going hiking with my family are just a few examples of how I spend my free time. These activities not only provide me with a sense of relaxation but also contribute to my overall well-being. I cherish these moments and look forward to engaging in them whenever I can.
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