作文内容：
请按照作文类型以及评分标准对上面的作文进行打分，并指出不足
1)评分原则
本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。
阅卷人应就总体印象给分，而不是按照语言错误的数量扣分。
评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。
拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英式、美式拼写及用法均可接受。
如书写较差难以辨认，以致影响交际，或字数明显少于要求，将分数降低一个档次
2)评分标准
第一档 25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务
- 清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
- 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
- 语言运用较为准确、恰当
第二档 19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务
- 清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
- 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
- 语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解
第三档 13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务
- 提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
- 运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
- 存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解
第四档 7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务
- 遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
- 语法结构和词汇单调。
- 语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解
第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务
- 明显遗漏内容要点
- 语法结构和词汇极单调
- 语言错误很多，严重影响理解
0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关
I have many hobbies, but today I would like to share one of my hobbies with you. I like raising turtles. One of my most important things is to feed the turtles. Every morning I usually get up to feed the turtles. I can't feed too much or too little, so the turtle aren't uncomfortable. Another important thing is to change the water for the turtle. I usually change the water twice a week so they don't get sick. I usually water my plants with dirty water, because I can save water. It's very good for our environment. Sometimes my turtles climb out of the tank, so I have to look for them! My hobby is to raise turtles. It brings me a lot of happiness. For example, my biggest turtle, every time I pass by it willclimb over, tilted his head looking at me, to attract me to play with it. They have accompanied me for nearly three years!
I like raising turtles. What about your hobbies? Can you tell me about you? | 
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