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第三单元测试卷 作文 How to learn English well

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徐丽雯 发表于 2023-10-2 21:06 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  English is important and useful to us .how can we learn English well? here are my suggestions .
  first,I remember 30 English words everyday.
second, I go over the grammar points regularly .
third, i read articles in English  newspapers, and I read simple novels in English .
fourth, I listen to English music and radio programs, and watch English programs.
finally,i  keep a diary in English and I often talk English with my friends.
that's all my suggestions ,hope help for you

Please identify and list any mistakes or unclear expressions in this essay written by a/an (目的语言) student.

王艳 发表于 2023-10-2 21:07 | 显示全部楼层
Here are the mistakes and unclear expressions in the essay:

1. In the sentence "first, I remember 30 English words everyday", "everyday" should be written as "every day".
2. The sentence "second, I go over the grammar points regularly" should be written as "Second, I review the grammar points regularly".
3. In the sentence "third, i read articles in English newspapers, and I read simple novels in English", the pronoun "i" should be capitalized as "I".
4. The sentence "fourth, I listen to English music and radio programs, and watch English programs" should be written as "Fourth, I listen to English music and radio programs, and watch English TV shows".
5. In the sentence "finally,i keep a diary in English and I often talk English with my friends", the pronoun "i" should be capitalized as "I".
6. In the sentence "hope help for you", it should be "hope this helps you" or "hope it is helpful for you".

Overall, the essay has several grammar and punctuation errors, as well as some unclear expressions.
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