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    spring is coming which is a beautiful and comfortable season. In the spring everything comes back to life .The flowers is becoming rad,the street is becoming green ,and the people becoming happier then the winter.
      There are many things we can do in the spring . First of all ,we can play football with our friends or our family .In additon,we also can fly a kite in the park or take a walk in the park with looking the flowers .Last but not least, we can spent more time with our family in the spring.
     In a word ,my favorite season is spring.

修改后：
    春天来了，这是一个美丽而舒适的季节。在春天，一切都复苏了。花朵变得鲜艳，街道变得绿意盎然，人们比冬天更加快乐。
    在春天我们可以做很多事情。首先，我们可以和朋友或家人一起踢足球。另外，我们还可以在公园放风筝或者散步时欣赏花朵。最重要的是，我们可以在春天多和家人一起度过时间。
    总之，我最喜欢的季节是春天。

admin 发表于 2023-9-19 14:29
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    春天来了，这是一个美丽而舒适的季节。在春天，一切都复苏了。花朵变得鲜艳，街道变得绿意盎 ...

不是翻译，是修改文章，打分

遇见~ 发表于 2023-09-19 14:30
不是翻译，是修改文章，打分

非常抱歉，我误解了您的要求。以下是对文章进行修改和打分的建议：

原文：
spring is coming which is a beautiful and comfortable season. In the spring everything comes back to life .The flowers is becoming rad,the street is becoming green ,and the people becoming happier then the winter.      There are many things we can do in the spring . First of all ,we can play football with our friends or our family .In additon,we also can fly a kite in the park or take a walk in the park with looking the flowers .Last but not least, we can spent more time with our family in the spring.     In a word ,my favorite season is spring.

修改后：
Spring is a beautiful and comfortable season. During this time, everything comes back to life. The flowers bloom brightly, the streets become green, and people become happier than in winter. There are many enjoyable activities to do in spring. Firstly, we can play football with our friends or family. Additionally, we can fly kites in the park or take walks while admiring the blooming flowers. Lastly, spring is a great time to spend more quality time with our families. In conclusion, my favorite season is spring.

打分：7.5/10
修改后的文章更加流畅和表达清晰，句子也更加连贯。但仍有一些语法错误和用词不准确的地方。建议检查并修正这些细节错误，以提高文章质量。