Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am very excited to share with you that I have found my dream job as a teacher. There are several reasons why I enjoy this job so much.
Firstly, teaching allows me to not only share knowledge with students but also improve my own skills and knowledge. Secondly, I have always enjoyed working with children, and being able to make them happy and learn new things every day is a great feeling. Lastly, I appreciate the fact that I have weekends off to rest and recharge.
Overall, teaching is my favorite job and I truly love it. What do you think about my decision? Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Like
批改意见：
Dear Like,
Your letter shows great enthusiasm and your passion for your new job as a teacher. However, there are some grammatical and structural errors that need to be improved.
Here are some suggestions:
- Capitalize the first letter of each sentence.
- Use "limited" instead of "limited as."
- Add articles such as "a" or "an" before nouns when necessary.
- Avoid using abbreviations like "l" and "u." Instead, write "I" and "you" in full.
- Use comma or full stop to separate clauses and sentences.
- Try to use more complex sentence structures to show a higher level of writing proficiency.
Keep up the good work!
Best regards,
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