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Recently,more and more people are talking about their childhood memories. From my perspective, there is no doubt that childhood is my happiest memory. There were a lot of interesting things, they made us happy and sometimes sadness. But all of these are worth to remember.

When I was little, I did not know how to celebrate the Spring Festival. My mum made new clothes and a lot of delicious food for us. After I grew up, I do the same thing for my son as well. It is not only interesting, but also good for our family. It helps us to get closer with our family. These experiences help me to learn how to celebrate the Spring Festival and develop good habits in a timely manner.

As for me ,childhood is my happiest memory.  After all, it not only brings our joyfulness but also makes our happiness.

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最近，越来越多的人在谈论他们的童年回忆。从我的角度来看，毫无疑问，童年是我最快乐的记忆。有许多有趣的事情，它们让我们感到快乐，有时也会带来悲伤。但所有这些都值得记住。

当我还很小的时候，我不知道如何庆祝春节。我妈妈为我们做了新衣服和许多美味的食物。在我长大后，我也为我的儿子做同样的事情。这不仅有趣，而且对我们的家庭有好处。它帮助我们与家人更加亲近。这些经历帮助我学会了如何庆祝春节，并及时养成了良好的习惯。

总之，对我来说，童年是我最快乐的记忆。因为它不仅带给我们快乐，也让我们变得更加幸福。

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文章整体来说表达清楚简洁，但结构需要改进，可以参考以下结构：

第一段：引出话题，阐述自己的观点；

第二段：举例说明童年记忆给你带来的好处；

第三段：再次总结自己的观点。

此外，建议在文章中增加过渡词和连接词，使内容更加连贯、流畅。同时，注意单词拼写、标点符号使用的准确性。