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Everyone has his or her own favorite entertainment  program.  More and more modern people pay attention to entertainment programs. Some like to go to KTV sing with their friends, while others fancy watch movie in friend's home and chat with each other. If you ask me, my answer would be i like watch movie very much.From my point of view, there are several reasons for this.First of all (for one thing), watch movie make me relaxed and be more energetic. Secondly(for one other thing), it can help to get closer to my best friend.    Finally, it is more than entertainment, it is a way of communication.Thus, that is why i like watch movie.



请检查作文语法问题，背的万能句子（蓝色字体）套用是否合适，括号里的能不能自由替换，辛苦老师批改！

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Everyone has his or her own favorite entertainment program. More and more modern people are paying attention to entertainment programs. Some like to go to KTV and sing with their friends, while others fancy watching a movie in a friend's home and chatting with each other. If you ask me, my answer would be that I like watching movies very much. From my point of view, there are several reasons for this. Firstly (for one thing), watching movies makes me relaxed and more energetic. Secondly (for another thing), it can help me get closer to my best friend. Finally, it is more than just entertainment; it is a way of communication. Thus, that is why I like watching movies.

对于蓝色字体的万能句子，有些可以自由替换，但并不是所有情况都适用。在这篇作文中，使用的万能句子比较合适，没有出现明显的语法问题。但是要注意，如果仅仅为了使用万能句子而去牺牲句子的流畅度和语言的自然性是不可取的。

admin 发表于 2023-4-15 16:14
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Everyone has his or her own favorite entertainment program. More and more mode ...

谢谢老师，有了模板，不会语料，也是很尴尬，只能找些，尽量能换个词就能用的句子来拼凑，老师下期准备些日常语料来背背。辛苦辛苦，撒花

不客气，我很高兴能够帮到你。语言是一种交流工具，自然流畅的表达才能更好地传递信息并与人沟通。所以不要过分依赖模板和万能句子，要注重语言的自然性和个性化。

下期我会准备更多日常语料，希望能对你有所帮助。祝你学习愉快！:smile: