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More and more people are talking about dream trip. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that Beijing is a perfect destination. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
The first point that I want to mention is that there are so many scenery spots in Beijing, and that is because this city has a very long history. What is more, it is easier for us to understand that there are so many delicious foods in Beijing, which is because many local snacks can be found there.
From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that Beijing is a perfect destination. After all, there are so many scenery spots and delicious foods.作文批改

More and more people are talking about their dream trips. From my perspective, Beijing is a perfect destination. The reasons why I believe this are listed below.

Firstly, Beijing has an abundance of scenic spots, owing to its long history. Visitors can easily explore landmarks such as the Great Wall of China, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. Secondly, Beijing is renowned for its diverse cuisine. Being a city with a rich culinary culture, it offers countless local snacks that are not only tasty but also affordable.

In conclusion, Beijing is a perfect destination for tourists because of its rich history, beautiful scenery and delicious food.

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