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第七部分:短文写作(第51题，30分)
因特网在为人们带来极大便利的同时，也带来了一系列问题。以“Is Internet a Blessing or a Curse?”为题写一篇150词左右的英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
Nowadays, the Internet is more and more popular in our daily life, work and studies. Like a coin, everything has two sides. In many ways, the Internet has a very positive effect. In turn, it has negative effect.
In our daily life, some people hold that the Internet is a blessing, because it can help people to make video chat with their families or friends. Others hold that the Internet is a curse, because some students spend too much time on playing games that they can not study well.
As far as I am concerned, I think that the Internet is a blessing. First of all, with the help of the Internet, we can study everywhere and anytime. Secondly, we do not have to go out and by a lot of things, it is very convenient and save time.
AII in all, I especially enjoy the convenience and fun brought by the Internet.
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Nowadays, the Internet is becoming increasingly popular in our daily lives, work, and studies. However, like a coin, everything has two sides. The Internet has both positive and negative effects.

In terms of its positive effects, some people believe that the Internet is a blessing because it allows for video chat with families or friends. Furthermore, the Internet enables us to study anywhere and at any time, which is convenient for students. In addition, online shopping saves time compared to going out to purchase items.

On the other hand, there are those who argue that the Internet is a curse since some students spend too much time playing games and neglect their studies.

As for me, I believe that the Internet is a blessing. Firstly, the Internet provides us with unlimited access to a wealth of knowledge, and secondly, it offers us convenience that cannot be matched by traditional methods.

In conclusion, despite the problems associated with it, the Internet has brought many benefits, and I particularly enjoy the convenience and entertainment it provides.