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With the dovelopment of the social.More and more peope are looking forward to healthy lifestyle. If you ask me which one is better, I would like to tell you some benfits about bicycle.
Fistly, the bicycle is good for your body.If i have liesure time, I wil invite my friends go biking. when I take bike,I breath the fresh air around me and the feeling  of boring go away.
Secondly, the bicycle is very cheap, because you only prepare  abike and some food in need
Thirdly,the autivity of bicycle,not only excerise your body.
but also can make you feel relex 。I hope you can becoming a partment of us. you wil gain the sense of achievement and love it forever。

随着社会的发展，越来越多的人期待健康的生活方式。如果你问我哪种更好，我想告诉你一些关于自行车的好处。首先，自行车对身体有好处。如果我有空闲时间，我会邀请我的朋友去骑自行车。当我骑自行车时，我呼吸周围的新鲜空气，烦恼的感觉消失了。其次，自行车非常便宜，因为你只需要准备一辆自行车和一些食物即可。第三，自行车的活动性不仅可以锻炼身体，还可以让你感到放松。我希望你能成为我们中的一员，你将获得成就感并且永远喜欢它。

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