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大梦想家 发表于 2023-4-10 14:55 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
51.请根据所提供材料中的要求完成一篇100 词左右的英语短文。并将短文写在答题纸相
应的位置上。
1.你业余时间的娱乐活动有哪些;
2.描述其中一项活动。
Everyone has his own  my spare time . Such as swiming ,running,walking,dacing and play basketball,However,I
like most is basketball.
First of all,it helps me keep healthy.Exercise is one of the most active and effective means to enhance the physical health.Secondly,playing bsketball is a good way to relax. When you are upset,soprts may pull you out from depression.Finally,its easier to make friends while you take part in sport activities,because you have the same interest.Its import for making friends.
In conclusion,i get a lot from basketball,like health and friendship. If you are also crazy about basketball,we can play together.
admin 发表于 2023-4-10 14:55 | 显示全部楼层
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Everyone has his own leisure activities during spare time, such as swimming, running, walking, dancing or playing basketball. However, my favorite activity is basketball.

Firstly, it helps me to keep healthy. Exercise is one of the most effective ways to improve physical health. Secondly, playing basketball is a good way to relax. When I feel upset, sports can help me to overcome depression. Moreover, participating in sports activities makes it easier for me to make friends since we share the same interest. It's important for building friendships.

In conclusion, basketball brings me many benefits, such as good health and friendship. If you are also a basketball lover, we can play together.
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