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51.请根据所提供材料中的要求完成一篇100 词左右的英语短文。并将短文写在答题纸相
应的位置上。
1.你业余时间的娱乐活动有哪些；
2.描述其中一项活动。
                                                                          My Hoddy
  There are different hoddies I have,such as running and cycing.When it comes to different hoddies,the majority of people believe that they have their own benefits.
  Faced with different hoddies,different people have different choices.On the one hand,some people like rinning because it is more enjoyable.On the other hand,other people prefer cycing because it is more fun.Everyong can choose what he likes.
  As far as I am concerned,I like running because it is more enjoyable.I hope you can enjoy it,as it is indeed good for us.
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My Hobby

There are different hobbies that I have, such as running and cycling. When it comes to different hobbies, the majority of people believe that they have their own benefits.

Faced with different hobbies, different people have different choices. On the one hand, some people like running because it is more enjoyable. On the other hand, others prefer cycling because it is more fun. Everyone can choose what they like.

As far as I am concerned, I like running because it is more enjoyable. I feel relaxed and refreshed after a good run. Besides, running is a great way to improve physical fitness and mental health. It helps me to stay fit and healthy.

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内容完整，包括了业余时间的娱乐活动和其中一项活动的描述，并且同时表达了自己对此活动的喜爱和好处。语言简洁清晰，但是有一些语法错误和拼写错误。建议在写作时注意语法和拼写的准确性。

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admin 发表于 2023-4-10 12:55
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My Hobby

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