My amausement on spare time
Many young people like various sport on their spare time,they think it's interesting on their life.But I don't like this,it's so boring for my spare time.
In fact,my favorite amausement is watch movie with my friend,it can teach you anything like how to cooking,how to keeping your body to heathy and you can see more and more birds and animals.The good movie like a good friend,it can tell you a good story that it's near your life.May be you can find the wold is vary beautiful on our naber.I can with my friend look at the movie story in the ending.
Soin this happiness time, I can go to every where on my spare time if I want.
Many young people like various sports in their spare time as they find them interesting. However, I do not share the same interest as I find them boring. In fact, my favorite pastime is watching movies with my friends. I believe that it can teach us many things such as how to cook, how to maintain good health and we can also learn about different species of birds and animals. A good movie is like a good friend that tells a story which is closely related to our lives. It helps us discover the beauty of the world around us. I enjoy discussing the plot and the ending of the movie with my friends during these happy moments. In my free time, I can go anywhere I want to, and enjoy my time to the fullest.
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My amusement in spare time
Many young people enjoy various sports in their spare time because they find them interesting. However, that is not the case for me. I find them quite boring. Instead, my favorite pastime is watching movies with my friends. Movies can teach us a lot of things, such as how to cook, how to maintain good health, and they also showcase different species of birds and animals. A good movie is like a good friend that tells a story closely related to our lives. It helps us discover the beauty of the world around us. I always enjoy discussing the plot and ending of a movie with my friends during these happy moments. During my free time, I can go anywhere I want to and enjoy my time to the fullest.
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