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Everyonehave a lot things which own like do in

leisuretime. My entertainments havevery deep in

leisuretime, such as playing basketball, going fishing, reading books and singingsongs. But the best entertainment is playing basketball.

Basketball is five games, two teams compete, totaling ten players. It aim taking basketball shooting the circle .Playing basketball has a lot advantage. On the one hand, you can exercise yourheart, lung , and  muscle. On the otherhand, you can add teamwork, which can bring a lot of benefit in works andstudies.

In aword, I like playing basketball and have benefit from it.

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在业余时间，每个人都有很多自己喜欢做的事情。我的娱乐活动非常多，比如打篮球、钓鱼、读书和唱歌。但最好的娱乐活动是打篮球。篮球是一种五对五的比赛，共有十个球员。它的目标是将篮球投进篮圈。打篮球有很多优点。一方面，你可以锻炼心脏、肺部和肌肉。另一方面，你可以增加团队合作精神，这在工作和学习中都会带来很多好处。总之，我喜欢打篮球，并从中受益匪浅。

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