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with the dovelopmont of the watd sthe language of Englih is be came very herssey. Acording to use English far commumtatin is more and morepopular. There are diferent ind to ltarring English for uwe. meaure.
First one you can try yout best to listoning English flim with your   collegue。
Not only dovelp your feeling of lanangue.But adso you can knaw lecated focn life Secondy, you corn speak English to your family and writing a litter for your bost friends.Thirdly,whon you have liegure time,you coan ivite your classmetes to reading English novels.You can ganed a sonse of this Engish aciovermont. Eventhough leamng english is very difficute ,but  hpe you will sueesed in th furest Hyou can insted  of  study.

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随着世界的发展，英语已经变得非常重要。随着英语在交流中的日益普及，人们有不同的学习英语的方法。

首先，你可以尽力与同事一起观看英语电影。这不仅可以提高语感，也可以了解外国生活形态。其次，你可以向家人说英语，并给你最好的朋友写信。第三，在你有空闲时间时，你可以邀请同学们一起阅读英语小说。从中，你可以获得英语方面的知识。虽然学习英语非常困难，但是我希望你能在未来成功地掌握它。你可以代替学习。