1. The dean issued a bulletin stating that the library would remain open on weekends.
- Reason for improvement: The original sentence uses "which" instead of "that", which is not grammatically correct. Using "stating" instead of "said" clarifies that it is an official statement.
2. He spread a rumor that the president was going to resign, which led to great confusion in that country.
- Reason for improvement: Adding "which" clarifies that the following clause is a consequence of the rumor.
3. If you were left alone on a desert island, what would you do first?
- Reason for improvement: Using "were" instead of "leaving" makes the sentence conditional and follows the correct verb tense.
4. Do you still remember those days we spent in Hong Kong last year?
- Reason for improvement: The pronoun "that" is not needed and the verb tense should be changed to past tense to match "last year".
5. It seems that more and more of my friends are facing great challenges in their lives.
- Reason for improvement: "His" should be changed to "their" to reflect plural possession. |