Dear Hiring Manager

Dear Hiring Manager,
I am excited to apply for the teacher at Company education . With a background in field, I have developed skills through regular habits like“memorizing 30 English words daily”and“reviewing grammar regularly”,leading to significant growth. My experience taught me —"I failed once but tried my best to improve"。
As an outgoing team player, I believe "friends should help each other" . I like your focus on Company Value, matching with my goal to "improve quality of life through creative solutions".
I am looking forward to contributing to your team. Thank you for considering my application.
Thank   
Liming

Based on the provided scoring criteria, here is an evaluation of the letter:

**Score: 13-18 (Third档次)**

### Strengths:
1. **Attempted Structure**: The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. Key elements like expressing excitement for the role and mentioning relevant skills are included.
2. **Expression of Interest and Alignment**: There is a genuine expression of interest in the position and an attempt to align personal goals with the company’s values.

### Areas for Improvement:
1. **Content Completion**: The letter lacks specific details about the position being applied for and the relevant experience that qualifies you for the role. It would be more effective if it included specific examples of achievements or experiences that make you a suitable candidate.
  
2. **Clarity and Grammar**:
   - The phrase “teacher at Company education” needs specificity and clarity. For instance, specify the role and the company's name accurately.
   - The sentence “With a background in field, I have...” should specify the exact field, e.g., “With a background in education...”.
   - Ensure consistent use of quotation marks. The use of quotes around phrases like "memorizing 30 English words daily" seems unnecessary unless you are quoting someone or a specific program.
   - The bullet point, “I failed once but tried my best to improve”, could be more impactful by elaborating on what was learned from the experience.

3. **Language and Tone**:
   - The language is mostly simple and could be enhanced by using more varied vocabulary and sentence structures.
   - The letter could benefit from a more professional tone by avoiding overly casual expressions and ensuring formal punctuation and style (e.g., proper use of capital letters and quotation marks).

### Suggestions:
- **Detail and Specificity**: Include specific examples of your teaching experience and how your skills directly relate to the job description.
- **Grammar and Proofreading**: Carefully proofread the letter for grammatical issues, punctuation errors, and clarity.
- **Personalization**: Tailor the letter for the specific role and company, showing understanding and awareness of their needs and your potential contribution.
  
By addressing these points, the quality and professionalism of the application letter can be significantly improved.