Green Transportation

      Green transportation is very important in our lives.As a matter of fact,it is good for us in many ways.Some people like drive cars,some people like public transport.As for me,I prefer public transport .
      First of all,green transportation gets me to know the world and helps me with my studies.In addition,it can save money for me,and it also very convenience.Last but not least,public transport is good for environment,so we should choose it to reduce resource waste and protect environmental pollution.
      As a result,as far as I am concerned,I think of public transport is very important,helpful and absolutely necessary.

**评分：第三档 13-18分**

**评语：**

这篇作文基本完成了题目要求，表达了关于绿色交通的重要性以及个人对公共交通的偏好。然而，文章在语言运用上有一些问题，影响了整体的流畅性和表达效果。以下是具体的批改建议：

1. **内容要点：**
   - 虽然你提到了绿色交通的重要性以及使用公共交通工具的好处，但没有提及为什么选择绿色交通对环境的重要具体细节。例如，可以补充一些关于如何减少碳排放或交通拥堵的具体例子。

2. **篇章结构：**
   - 文章结构稍显简单，各段落之间的逻辑联系不够紧密。可以在段落之间增加一些过渡句，以提高文章的连贯性。

3. **语法与词汇：**
   - "Some people like drive cars" 应该是 "Some people like to drive cars"。
   - "it also very convenience" 应改为 "it is also very convenient"。
   - "we should choose it to reduce resource waste and protect environmental pollution." 中的 "protect environmental pollution" 语义不当，应为 "prevent environmental pollution"。
   - "I think of public transport is very important" 应改为 "I think public transport is very important"。

4. **语言运用：**
   - 可以丰富词汇的使用，以及尝试使用一些复杂句型，以展示更高的语言掌握水平。

总的来说，这篇作文表达了一些重要观点，但需要在语言准确性和细节描写上进行改进。建议多加练习，提高语法和词汇的应用能力，同时加强段落之间的逻辑衔接。