It is well known that bicycle is very important in our china and lives.some people like riding bicycle,some people live car,but I prefer ride bicycle than others.here are the reasons:First of all,ride bicycle helps our enviroument becom clear.What's more,ride bicycle save some money than car.Last but not least.ride bicycle helps someone save time go to workplace.In conclusion,as for as I concerned bicycle is very important in our furthun.
2. **语法问题**：
- "ride bicycle" 应为 "riding a bicycle"，动名词形式更适合。
- "save some money than car" 中的比较应为 "saves more money than driving a car"。
- "as for as I concerned" 应为 "as far as I am concerned"。
3. **连接词和句子结构**：
- 使用更恰当的连接词提升文章流畅性，如："Firstly," "Moreover," 和 "Finally,"。
- 调整句子结构以加强逻辑关系。例如，"Riding a bicycle helps the environment become cleaner"。
4. **观点扩展**：
- 可以进一步解释每个优点，例如如何具体帮助环境或节省时间。
**修改后的版本**：
It is well known that bicycles are very important in China and our daily lives. Some people like riding bicycles, while others prefer cars. However, I prefer riding bicycles for several reasons.
Firstly, riding a bicycle helps our environment become cleaner. Moreover, it saves more money compared to driving a car. Finally, riding a bicycle can help save time when commuting to work.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, bicycles will be very important in our future.
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