Self-study English

     Self-study is very popular way to learn something.Nowadays many people choose this way to improve themseves,you can learn something on the Internet as well as on the book,etc.
     I am interest in self-study and I really enjoy it.But there is some diffculties in self-study.For example,we cannot understand many diffcult thing only by ourselves.In addition,when we learn some new knowledge and words,We feel very diffculty,but self-study is very meaningful for us.further more,it not only helps us improve our learn ability,bu also it brings us a very important learn way.
    so,I prefer to self-study.

### 评分

**内容要点：**
1. 自学是一种流行的学习方式。
2. 可以通过互联网和书籍自学。
3. 自学有趣但有困难。
4. 自学不能解决所有问题。
5. 自学有助于提高学习能力。

**篇章结构：**
文章结构基本完整，但段落之间的衔接需要加强。

**语言运用：**
存在一些语法和拼写错误，影响了理解。

**评分：**

第三档（13-18分）：基本完成了试题规定的任务。提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)。运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求。存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解。

评分：15 分

### 批改建议

1. **明确表达观点：**
   开头可以更明确地引出主题，比如："Self-study is a very popular way to learn something nowadays."

2. **正确使用词汇和语法：**
   - "interest" 应为 “interested”：“I am interested in self-study and I really enjoy it.”
   - "diffculties" 应为 “difficulties”：Spelling error.
   - "diffcult" 应为 "difficult"：Spelling error.
   - "feel very diffculty" 应为 "find it very difficult"：Correct grammatical structure.
   - "it not only helps us improve our learn ability,bu also it brings us a very important learn way." 改为 "it not only helps us improve our learning ability, but also provides us with a very important way of learning."

3. **连接词：**
   - "so,I prefer to self-study."改为"So, I prefer self-study."
   - 注意使连接词前后的句子逻辑更加通顺。

4. **一致性：**
   - 保持动词时态、数的一致。"We feel very diffculty" 改为 "We find it very difficult”。

5. **段落划分：**
   三个段落划分可以考虑重新调整，使每个段落有一个明确的中心思想。
  
### 修改后的示范

Self-study English

Self-study is a very popular way to learn something nowadays. Many people choose this method to improve themselves. You can learn something on the Internet as well as in books, etc.

I am interested in self-study and I really enjoy it. However, there are some difficulties in self-study. For example, we cannot understand many difficult things by ourselves. In addition, when we learn new knowledge and words, we find it very difficult. But self-study is very meaningful for us. Furthermore, it not only helps us improve our learning ability, but also provides us with a very important way of learning.

So, I prefer self-study.

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经过一系列修正和提升，这篇文章的内容、篇章结构和语言运用都得到了改善，可以打到第二档水平。