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作文批改An unforgettable holiday

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菇嘟泡泡 发表于 2024-4-11 21:02 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
An Unforgettable holiday
If you ask me what holiday my perfer is,I would tell you that it is when I traveling along the Yangtze River.
The Yongtze River is great nature south China.A lot of people are writing article to scripted for Yangtze River ever.I love it yet, even though that I amnot stay home at there,but it also can't limit me.
So beautiful is Yangtze River that in my heart. When I traveling along the Yangte River. Not only can Iadlmire breathtaking natural landscpes, but also I can feel the Splendor and Wonderful cities along the way.
If you will come to China,you can go there.It must make a totally impression on you.
陶果果 发表于 2024-4-11 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
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An Unforgettable Holiday

If you ask me what my favorite holiday is, I would tell you it’s when I traveled along the Yangtze River. The Yangtze River is a magnificent natural wonder in southern China. Many people have written articles extolling the beauty of the Yangtze River, and I love it dearly. Even though I couldn't stay there permanently, its charm continues to captivate me.

The Yangtze River is so beautiful that it holds a special place in my heart. When I traveled along the Yangtze River, I not only admired the breathtaking natural landscapes, but also experienced the grandeur and charm of the cities along the way.

If you ever come to China, I highly recommend a visit to the Yangtze River. It will surely leave a lasting impression on you.
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