The Best Place To Go

作文内容：

The Best Place To Go

It is well knownthat travel is very popular and trendy in this day and age. As a matter offact, there are many wonderful places in the world that people can visit. Butin my opinion, I enjoy traveling to Beijing. Here are the reasons.

First of all, thereare many interesting places in Beijing, such as the Great Wall, the ImperialPalace, and the Summer Palace. In addition, the air is fresh and clean, and thescenery is very beautiful. We can spend two or three days visiting the sights. Lastbut not least, the local people are very friendly and kind. We can enjoy manykinds of delicious foods in Beijing.

As a result, asfar as I am concerned, Beijing is the best place to go.

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1)评分原则

本题总分为30分，按5个档次评分。

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评分时，先根据文章的内容要点、篇章结构和语言运用初步确定其所属的档次，然后依照该档次的具体要求酌情增减分数，最后给分应避免分数趋中现象，即不能只给中间档次的分数，该给高分时就应给高分(包含满分)，该给低分时就应给低分(包含0分)。

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2)评分标准

第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
• 语言运用较为准确、恰当
  

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

• 清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
• 运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
• 语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解
  

第三档    13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务

• 提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
• 运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
• 存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解
  

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

• 遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇单调。
• 语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解
  

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

• 明显遗漏内容要点
• 语法结构和词汇极单调
• 语言错误很多，严重影响理解
  

0分：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；所写内容与题目要求完全无关

评分：第二档 19-24分

修改：
1. 作文内容基本完成了题目要求，清晰地表达了去北京旅游的原因和优点，但没有提及其他可能的选择。
2. 语法结构和词汇使用基本满足任务要求，但有一些小错误，例如在第三段中的“fresh and clean”应该是beijing的空气。
3. 语言运用基本正确，语言流畅度较高，虽然有少量错误，但不影响理解。
4. 需要增加对北京其他景点的介绍，以及更详细的描述北京的美食和当地人的友好性。
5. 可以增加一些衔接词和过渡句，使得文章结构更加流畅。

修改后的作文：
The Best Place To Go
It is well known that travel is very popular and trendy in this day and age. As a matter of fact, there are many wonderful places in the world that people can visit. But in my opinion, Beijing is one of the best places to travel to. Here are the reasons.
First of all, there are many interesting places to visit in Beijing, such as the Great Wall, the Imperial Palace, the Temple of Heaven, and the Summer Palace. Each of these places has its own unique charm that attracts tourists from all over the world. In addition to these famous attractions, Beijing also has many beautiful parks and gardens where visitors can relax and enjoy the natural scenery.
Furthermore, Beijing's air is relatively fresh and clean compared to some other big cities in China. This makes it a pleasant place to spend a few days exploring and sightseeing. The city's cleanliness and well-maintained public spaces also contribute to its appeal as a travel destination.
Last but not least, the local people in Beijing are known for their friendliness and hospitality. They are always ready to help visitors and make them feel welcome. Moreover, Beijing is famous for its delicious cuisine. From Peking duck to traditional dumplings, there are countless options for food lovers to savor and enjoy.
In conclusion, based on the interesting places to visit, the fresh air, the beautiful scenery, the friendly people, and the delicious food, I believe that Beijing is one of the best places to go for travel. However, it is important to note that there are many other amazing destinations around the world that are worth exploring as well.