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I like playing sports
  When it comes to what sports do you like,everyone has his or her own idea.As far as I am concerned,I often play basketball.I always think play baskerball has a great number of benefits.The following are the benefits.
  There are a great number of benefits from playing basketball.on the one hand,play baskerball brings joys and health to my life.on the other hand,if I have worries and cares from daily life,going to the sports ground to play basketball helps me forget all my troubles.Last but not least,basketball that keeps me in good shape and mood.
  In conclusion,I like playing sports,especially like basketball.which improves my health both in body and mind.

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I like playing sports. When it comes to what sports I like, everyone has their own idea. As far as I am concerned, I often play basketball. I always think playing basketball has a great number of benefits. The following are the benefits.

There are a great number of benefits from playing basketball. On one hand, playing basketball brings joy and health to my life. On the other hand, if I have worries and concerns from daily life, going to the sports ground to play basketball helps me forget all of my troubles. Last but not least, basketball keeps me in good shape and improves my mood.

In conclusion, I enjoy playing sports, especially basketball, as it improves both my physical and mental health.