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A覃孓馔 发表于 2023-4-11 18:59 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
1.你业余时间的娱乐活动有哪些;
2.描述其中一项活动。
In recently, as people's living standard improves, people have a lot of entertainment in leisure time.  My entertainment is about playing basketball, riding bike and reading books. But one the best favorite entertainment is reading books.
Reading books are simple actions, you don't need special places. You just bring a book which you like . You can read at anywhere and anytime.
Reading books have a lot of benefit . First and foremost, Reading books can broaden your horizons from books. In addition, that also can liberate your imagination from books. Last but not least, Reading books  could improve your academic capacity.
In a word, I like reading book and has a lot of benefit from it.
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admin 发表于 2023-4-11 19:00 | 显示全部楼层
作文已经很不错啦,只有一些小的语法错误需要修改。在第一段中,“entertainment”应该改为“entertainments”,因为这里指的是多种不同的娱乐方式。在第二段中,应该改为“one of my favorite entertainments is reading books”。此外,在第三段中,“from books”应该改为“through books”的更自然一些。

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