我的爱好+请批改作文

Everyone has hobbies, such as running, reading, playing basketball and so on. For me, I like running. On the one hand, there is no doubt that it is good for health. I go running every morning because it relaxes me and it can get rid of the tiredness of the day. Running increases my energy and fills my day with mental energy. There are many problems in our life every day, so we have to find a way to release negative energy. On the other hand, running is friendly to the environment. Running can not only exercise the body, but also protect the environment, so my main hobby is running, do you have the same hobby as me?

你的作文写得很好，用词精准，结构清晰。这里提供一些小细节上的建议：

1. 第二句话可以表述得更加丰富些，例如：“每个人都有自己的爱好, 例如跑步、阅读、篮球等等。”

2. “释放负面能量”可以换成“舒缓压力”，更加地符合语言习惯。

3. 建议添加一个过渡句，承接上一段，例如：“因此，我选择了跑步作为我的主要爱好。”

4. 最后一句话可以引导读者跟你交流，例如：“你有没有和我一样喜欢跑步呢？”这样可以让文章更加生动活泼，并且增加互动性。

总之，这篇作文写得非常不错，加上以上小建议，会更加完美！