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-With the dovelopment of the social.More and more peope are looking forward to healthy lifestyle. If you ask me which one is better, I would like to tell you some benfits about bicycle.
Fistly, the bicycle is good for your body.If i have liesure time, I wil invite my friends go biking. when I take bike,I breath the fresh air around me and the feeling  of boring go away.
Secondly, the bicycle is very cheap, because you only prepare  abike and some food in need
Thirdly,the autivity of bicycle,not only excerise your body.
but also can make you feel relex 。I hope you can becoming a partment of us. you wil gain the sense of achievement and love it forever。

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随着社会的发展，越来越多的人渴望拥有健康的生活方式。如果你问我哪种方式更好，我想告诉你一些关于骑自行车的好处。

首先，骑自行车对身体很好。如果我有空闲时间，我会邀请我的朋友们一起去骑车。当我骑车时，呼吸周围的新鲜空气，无聊的感觉也随之而去。

其次，自行车非常便宜，因为你只需要准备一辆自行车和一些食物就可以了。

第三，骑自行车的活动不仅锻炼了身体，还能让你感到放松。我希望你能加入我们的行列。你会获得成就感并且一直喜欢上它。

文章修改意见如下：

1. "dovelopment" 改为 "development"; "peope" 改为 "people"; "benfits" 改为 "benefits"; "Fistly" 改为 "Firstly"; "liesure" 改为 "leisure"; "when I take bike,I breath the fresh air around me and the feeling of boring go away." 改为 "When I ride a bike, I breathe in the fresh air around me and the feeling of boredom disappears".

2. "abike" 改为 "a bike"; "in need" 改为 "needed".

3. "autivity" 应该是想表达"activity"，修改为"activity"；"relex" 改为 "relaxed"；"apartment" 改为 "apartment".

4. 去掉文章开头的横线。

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