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Recently, more and more people are talking about favorite seasons. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that spring is the most comfortable season. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.

The first point that I want to mention is that spring can give humans a great hope, and that is because spring is a new beginning in a year so that bring humans a hope in the future. What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that spring is a colorful season that can let us breathe fresh air , which is because spring is the season of renewal many trees and flowers will grow.

From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that spring is the most comfortable season in a year. After all spring can give  humans a great hope and spring is a colorful season that can let us breathe fresh air.

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最近，越来越多的人在谈论他们最喜欢的季节。在我看来，毫无疑问，春天是最舒适的季节。我认为如下几点原因。

首先，春天能够给人类带来希望，这是因为春天代表着一年的新开始，让人们对未来充满了希望。此外，春天是一个多彩的季节，能够让我们呼吸到新鲜空气，这是因为许多树木和花卉会在春天更新生长。

从我以上所提到的内容，我们可以很容易地得出结论，春天是一年中最舒适的季节。毕竟，春天能够为人类带来巨大的希望，同时春天也是一个多彩的季节，能够让我们呼吸到新鲜空气。