作文协助改批1

P1: Recently, more and more people are talking about live where is better.From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that live in the countryside is better than city.The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
P2: The first point that I want to mention is that countryside air is better than city, and that is because city pollution is serious.What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that countryside pressure is small than city, which is because city house is expensive,cannot afford.
P3: From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that live in the cuntryside is better.After all, countryside air is better and countryside perssuse is small.

建议改批如下：

P1: 近来，越来越多的人们在探讨何处居住更宜人。从我的角度来看，毫无疑问，生活在农村比城市更好。我认为如下几点原因可以说明这个观点。

P2: 首先要提到的是，农村空气质量优于城市，因为城市污染十分严重。而且，农村的压力相对来说更小，这主要是因为城市房价高昂，人们难以承担。

P3: 从以上所述，我们可以得出结论：生活在农村更好。毕竟，农村的空气质量更佳，而且压力相对较小。