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It is well known that coffee and tea are very popular and trendy drinks. As a matter of fact coffee and tea are good for us in many ways. More and more people talking about coffee or tea
Some people hold the view that coffee is better than tea, because coffee is more delicious and refreshing than tea, coffee helps us to keep refreshing all day. While other people argue that tea is better than coffer, because tea is lighter and more flavorful than coffee, it helps us to feel Chinese culture.
As for me, I agree that both aspects should be considered when talking about coffee of tea. However, I prefer coffee more than tea. Because I like keeping refreshing all day, which makes me full of energy and improves my study efficiency surely.

短文批改：

It is well known that coffee and tea are very popular and trendy drinks. As a matter of fact, coffee and tea are good for us in many ways. More and more people are talking about coffee or tea.

Some people hold the view that coffee is better than tea because it is more delicious and refreshing than tea. Coffee helps us to stay refreshed throughout the day. However, others argue that tea is better than coffee because it is lighter and more flavorful than coffee. Furthermore, it allows us to experience Chinese culture.

As for me, I agree that both aspects should be considered when comparing coffee and tea. However, I prefer coffee over tea because it keeps me refreshed all day, which provides me with energy and improves my study efficiency.

修改后的版本改正了以下错误：

- 第一段中，“more and more people talking about coffee or tea”应为“more and more people are talking about coffee or tea”
- 第二段中，“coffer”应为“coffee”
- 第三段中，应该加上“Furthermore”来连接前面提到的两个优点，并且“feel”应该改为“experience”
- 最后一段中，“of”应该改为“or”，而且应加上“comparing”以更清晰地表达比较的对象，同时将“surely”改为“certainly”以更准确地表达肯定的含义。