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Dear Tom,
I'm glad to writing for you to introduction the Summer hoilay astivity. This Summor holiday I became a volunteerwhich way necessary for our goverment. If you ask me which better do you think.Iwi told you some nteresting things abut this holiday
The volunter shouldhelp d peope who couldnit cookig by hinsey and care for Some choloren,they are poueents couldit lok foruenol them. I pent two hurs cooking dimar for old man.Aand spat abort 3 haus tno take care of the children Not only help them but alo com get achievement.I like my work every day助你aThowolunter is very importont fors heples poople,Thay can got wseful help ard doesn't pay monty for them.Even felt tired but very meaningful. I'm happy to reply for you.
LiKe

Dear Tom,

I am writing to tell you about my summer holiday activity. This summer, I became a volunteer for the government. If you ask me which one is better, I would like to share some interesting things about this activity.

As a volunteer, I helped people who couldn't cook and cared for some children whose parents were unable to take care of them. I spent two hours cooking dinner for an old man and around three hours taking care of the children. Not only did I feel good about helping them, but I also gained a sense of achievement. It was a very important task to help those in need, and they received useful assistance without having to pay any money. Although it was tiring, it was meaningful work that made me happy.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to share my experience with you.

LiKe