Notice

       Poetry Recitation Contest is very meaningful,it is well known that it is very important in our lives.As a matter of fact,it is good for us in many ways.The students meeting will hold a Poetry Recitation Contest activity,and is Tang and Song poetry ,it will take place at our school at begin 2:00 pm on Sunday.The activity will last for four hours,from 2:00 pm to 6:00 pm.So I want to invite students to take part in  Poetry Recitation Contest.I really hope student can come and join us.I am looking forward to meeting you.

Based on the provided writing, here’s an evaluation according to the given scoring criteria, as well as suggestions for improvement.

### Score: 13-18 (Third Tier)

#### Evaluation:

1. **Content and Purpose:**
   - The main idea of announcing a Poetry Recitation Contest is clear. Important details such as the date, time, and theme (Tang and Song poetry) are included.
   - However, there are some clarity issues in expressing ideas, such as the explanation of benefits not being clearly linked to the contest initiated by the "students meeting."

2. **Language Use:**
   - The essay satisfies the minimum requirements of grammar and vocabulary, but it needs improvement for better cohesion and coherence.
   - There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings, such as "the students meeting will hold a Poetry Recitation Contest activity" and "it will take place at our school at begin 2:00 pm on Sunday."

3. **Structure:**
   - The structure is basic and could benefit from more coherent flow and paragraphing to enhance readability.
   - The use of transitions between sentences and ideas can be improved.

4. **Suggestions for Improvement:**
   - **Clarity and Detail:** Clearly state the purpose of the contest and its benefits. For example, "articipating in the Poetry Recitation Contest can enhance your appreciation for literature and public speaking skills."
   
   - **Grammar and Vocabulary:** Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence construction. For instance, "The students' committee is organizing a Poetry Recitation Contest" would be more appropriate.
   
   - **Structure and Flow:** Organize the information logically. Start with the importance, then move to specifics about the event, and conclude with an invitation. Consider using paragraphs for each section.
   
   - **Punctuation and Spacing:** Ensure spaces after commas and periods. For example, "I really hope students can come and join us." should have space before the next sentence and correct pluralization of "student."

5. **Polish Phrasing:**
   - Original: "oetry Recitation Contest is very meaningful,it is well known that it is very important in our lives."
   - Improved: "The Poetry Recitation Contest is a meaningful event that plays an important role in our lives."

By addressing these issues, the overall effectiveness and readability of the notice can be significantly enhanced.