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Dear Mike
How are you?I am LiKe to from beijing.I writing this email to tell you that I want you can arrive this here.
This action time on the sunday and action majoy is speak English.this action will begin start at my home.so,I hope you can arrive my home.I don't know if you have some times to my home.I hope hear you  to come here.
Best Wishes
LiKe

### Score: 7-12 分 (第四档)

### Comments:
1. **Content and Clarity (内容和清晰度)**:
   - The message is not entirely clear, mainly due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.
   - Some key points are present but not clearly expressed.

2. **Grammar and Vocabulary (语法和词汇)**:
   - There are numerous grammatical errors and incorrect word choices that make the email difficult to understand.
   - Incorrect use of tenses and prepositions.

3. **Language Use (语言使用)**:
   - The language is quite elementary and lacks sophistication.
   - Many sentences are awkwardly constructed.

4. **Structure (结构)**:
   - The structure is basic but not fully coherent.
   - Missing proper salutations and closures commonly expected in formal or semi-formal emails.

### Suggestions for Improvement:
1. **Opening Sentence**:
    - Original: "How are you?I am LiKe to from beijing."
    - Suggestion: "How are you? I hope this email finds you well. I am LiKe from Beijing."

2. **Purpose of the Email**:
    - Original: "I writing this email to tell you that I want you can arrive this here."
    - Suggestion: "I am writing this email to invite you to an event at my home."

3. **Details about the Event**:
    - Original: "This action time on the sunday and action majoy is speak English.this action will begin start at my home.so,I hope you can arrive my home."
    - Suggestion: "The event will take place this Sunday and will focus on practicing English. It will begin at my home."

4. **Invitation Confirmation**:
    - Original: "I don't know if you have some times to my home.I hope hear you to come here."
    - Suggestion: "I hope you can attend. Please let me know if you are available."

5. **Closing**:
    - Original: "Best Wishes"
    - Suggestion: "Best wishes, LiKe"

### Revised Email:
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Dear Mike,

How are you? I hope this email finds you well. I am LiKe from Beijing.

I am writing this email to invite you to an event at my home. The event will take place this Sunday and will focus on practicing English. It will begin at my home.

I hope you can attend. Please let me know if you are available.

Best wishes,

LiKe

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This revision addresses the primary issues related to clarity, grammar, vocabulary, and structure, making the email more comprehensible and appropriately formatted.