I like Playing Sports

    with the development of the playing sports,it is well known that playing sports are very important in our lives.As a matter of fact,We need a good sports for our health.As for me,I usually playing basketball.Here are the reasons.
     First of all,it brings me much happiness.For example,playing basketball can help me improve my sport ability.In addition,playing basketball is very meaningful,because it not only lets me make new freinds,but also can stay my healthy ability.Last but not least,I can spend many times with playing basketball,and I hope I can become a basketball player.
     As a result,as far as I am concerned,I usually playing basketball.

根据评分标准，我对这篇作文进行打分和批改如下：

总体评价：作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，但在语法、词汇和表达上存在较多问题。以下是详细评分和建议。

**评分：**
第三档13-18分：基本完成了试题规定的任务
- 提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
- 运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
- 存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解

**具体问题和建议：**

1. **标题和开头部分：**
   - "with the development of the playing sports" 改为 "With the development of sports".
   - "playing sports are very important" 改为 "playing sports is very important".

2. **表达方式：**
   - "We need a good sports for our health" 改为 "We need to play sports for our health" 或者 "Sports are essential for our health".
   
3. **语法错误：**
   - “I usually playing basketball” 改为 “I usually play basketball”.

4. **细节部分：**
   - "First of all,it brings me much happiness." 中 “it” 前需加空格。
   - "sport ability" 改为 "sports ability".
   - “stay my healthy ability” 改为 “maintain my health”.

5. **逻辑与连贯性：**
   - "I can spend many times with playing basketball" 改为 "I can spend a lot of time playing basketball".
   - "I hope I can become a basketball player" 可以扩充一下，希望如何实现，例如 “I hope to train hard and become a basketball player someday”.

6. **最后总结：**
   - "As a result,as far as I am concerned,I usually playing basketball." 这句可以改为 “In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, I really enjoy playing basketball.”

**修改后的版本：**

**I Like Playing Sports**

With the development of sports, it is well known that playing sports is very important in our lives. As a matter of fact, we need to play sports for our health. As for me, I usually play basketball. Here are the reasons.

First of all, playing basketball brings me much happiness. For example, it helps me improve my sports ability. In addition, playing basketball is very meaningful because it not only allows me to make new friends but also helps me maintain my health. Last but not least, I can spend a lot of time playing basketball, and I hope to train hard and become a basketball player someday.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, I really enjoy playing basketball.

**评分：**
根据修改后的版本，我认为这篇作文可以提升到20-22分，即第二档的水平，因为它清楚地表达了关键内容要点，语法和词汇运用也基本正确，尽管还有一些不足。