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笙。 发表于 2023-10-21 12:18 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

第一档    25-30分:圆满完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
语言运用较为准确、恰当

第二档    19-24分:完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
语言运用基本正确,虽有小错,但不影响理解

第三档    13-18分:基本完成了试题规定的任务

提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
存在一些语言错误,但基本不影响理解

第四档    7-12分:完成了一部分试题规定的任务

遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
语法结构和词汇单调。
语言错误较多,部分错误影响理解

第五档1-6分:未完成试题规定的任务

明显遗漏内容要点
语法结构和词汇极单调
语言错误很多,严重影响理解

0分:所传达的信息或所用语言太少,无法评价;所写内容与题目要求完全无关
Recently, more and more people are talking about exercise everday. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that playing basketball  is the most great choice in this world. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
  The first point that I want to mention is that playing basketball can makes people a healthy body, and that is because playing basketball  needs walking every day that makes you stonger , What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that playing basketball can have real friendship with your players , which is because playing basketball it is a group games .
  From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that playing basketball  is the most great choice in this world.After all,playing basketball can makes people a healthy body and having real friendship .


王艳 发表于 2023-10-21 12:18 | 显示全部楼层
Recently, there has been a lot of discussion about the importance of exercise in our daily lives. In my opinion, playing basketball is an excellent choice for staying active and healthy. There are several reasons why I believe this.

Firstly, playing basketball helps to improve physical fitness. When you play basketball, you need to constantly move around and be active. This helps to increase your strength and endurance. Moreover, playing basketball involves a lot of running and jumping, which helps to improve cardiovascular health. Therefore, it is a great way to stay in shape and maintain a healthy body.

Secondly, playing basketball can also foster strong friendships and camaraderie. Basketball is a team sport, and playing with others can create a sense of unity and teamwork. You learn to trust and rely on your teammates, and this can build lasting friendships. Additionally, playing basketball together can also be a lot of fun and provide a great opportunity for social interaction.

From the points I have mentioned above, it is clear that playing basketball is a wonderful choice for both physical health and interpersonal relationships. It provides a fun and effective way to exercise while also fostering strong friendships. Therefore, I highly recommend playing basketball as an excellent option for staying active and healthy.
笙。楼主 发表于 2023-10-21 12:20 | 显示全部楼层
需要对作文评分
王艳 发表于 2023-10-21 12:20 | 显示全部楼层
笙。 发表于 2023-10-21 12:20
需要对作文评分

根据我对你的作文进行评分,我认为该作文属于第三档,得分为13-18分。你基本完成了试题规定的任务,提及了关键内容要点,但可能漏掉了一些细节。在语言运用方面,你使用了一些恰当的词汇和语法结构,能够满足任务的最低要求。然而,还存在一些语言错误,这些错误虽然不影响理解,但仍然需要加以改进。希望你在后续的写作中能够更加注重表达准确性和语言的流畅度。
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