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Fight against COVID-19
Recently, the phenomenon of fighting against COVID-19 has become the focus of the public concern. It is no easy task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor. It is harmful for both social development and health.
The solution vary according to different situations. First of all, there should be a law against it. Furthermore, the media should spread moral education . Only when all people stop pursuing personal interests at the price of polluting the environment can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation.
All in all, only when all of us join in the efforts can we solve the problem of fighting against COVID-19so as to meet everyone’s need. Finally, there must be a bright future waiting for us.
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第一档    25-30分：圆满完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部内容要点。
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求
语言运用较为准确、恰当

第二档    19-24分：完成了试题规定的任务

清楚地表达了全部或关键内容要点
运用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的基本要求
语言运用基本正确，虽有小错，但不影响理解

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提及了关键内容要点(可能漏掉了个别内容)
运用的语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求
存在一些语言错误，但基本不影响理解

第四档    7-12分：完成了一部分试题规定的任务

遗漏或未能清楚表达内容要点
语法结构和词汇单调。
语言错误较多，部分错误影响理解

第五档1-6分：未完成试题规定的任务

明显遗漏内容要点
语法结构和词汇极单调
语言错误很多，严重影响理解

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Fight against COVID-19
Recently, the phenomenon of fighting against COVID-19 has become the focus of public concern. It is no easy task to explain the reasons for this phenomenon as it involves various complicated factors. The outbreak of COVID-19 has not only posed serious threats to social development but also to people's health.

The solutions to this issue vary according to different situations. Firstly, governments should establish laws and regulations to control the spread of the virus. Strict measures, such as lockdowns and travel restrictions, should be implemented to prevent the further transmission of the virus. Secondly, the media should play a crucial role in spreading moral education. They should promote responsible behavior and provide accurate information about the virus to the public. Additionally, individuals should also take responsibility for their own actions and stop pursuing personal interests at the expense of polluting the environment. Only when all people work together can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation.

In conclusion, it is vital for all of us to join efforts in fighting against COVID-19 in order to meet the needs of everyone. Together, we can create a brighter future.

评分：第二档 19-24分

该作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，清楚地表达了主题和立意。文章给出了对抗COVID-19的原因和现象，并提出了解决问题的方法。语法结构较为准确，语言运用基本正确。但是一些句子的表达还可以更加精准和流畅。同时，文章的结构有些松散，缺乏逻辑推进和连贯性，需要进一步完善。此外，还有一些拼写错误和标点符号使用不规范的问题，需要加以纠正。总体来说，该作文需要进一步改进和提升，以达到较高的分数。