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Dear Tom,
How is everything going?
This is Li Ke  from China. I am writing this email to share a thing about I had found a job of teacher with you. Here are the reasons as blew.

Fist and foremost, It is obvious that I fancy being a teacher most. Because teacher can give students a better future,  teacher can pass the knowledge down students, so that students can give a better job in the future. What is more, it is a job that can give your confidence, which is because most people respect teacher and students admire their teacher. Last but not least, teacher has many kinds of holiday,so that can make you with family and friends enjoy this holiday.

In a word, I like being a teacher very much.

I hope you and your family good health and happiness. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes
Li Ke

Dear Li Ke,

Thank you for writing to me. Overall, your email is clear and easy to understand. However, there are some mistakes in grammar and spelling that I would like to correct.

First of all, in the first sentence, it should be "I am writing this email to share something with you" instead of "to share a thing about I had found a job of teacher with you". Secondly, in the second sentence, "as blew" should be "as follows".

In the third sentence, "Fist" should be "First", and "most" should be placed after "teacher". The sentence "What is more, it is a job that can give your confidence" should be corrected to "Moreover, being a teacher can boost your confidence, as most people respect teachers and students admire them."

In the fourth sentence, "can make you with family and friends enjoy this holiday" should be corrected to "allows you to spend holidays with family and friends". Lastly, in the closing line, "Best wishes Li Ke" should be "Best regards, Li Ke".

I hope my corrections are helpful to you. Keep up the good work in learning English!

Best regards,
Tom