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When we grow up,we always miss our childhood. There are lots of interesting things,they made us happy and sometimes sorrow, but all of these worth to remember.                                                                             In my chlidhood, there was a interesting thing which I could not forget forever.I remember when I 8 years old, I did not want to go to school so I went to park.I looked around,The sky was bule and the leaves on the trees had turned green,the sun was shining brightly and air was so fresh.What a beautiful scene.Let me draw this scene and told my mother this is my dream to become a painter. My mother told if you study hard you can bwcome a pianter.So I start study hard every day.
   This is my happy thing in my life and I never forget it forever     

When we grow up, we often find ourselves reminiscing about our childhood. It was a time full of interesting experiences that brought happiness and sometimes even sadness, but they were all worth remembering.

In my own childhood, there was one particular experience that I will never forget. When I was eight years old, I didn't want to go to school, so I went to the park instead. As I looked around, I saw the blue sky and leaves turning green on the trees. The sun was shining brightly and the air was so fresh. What a beautiful scene! I decided to draw it and show it to my mother, telling her that I wanted to become a painter when I grow up. My mother encouraged me and told me that if I study hard, I could become a painter.

From that day on, I started studying hard every day. This childhood memory has stayed with me and continues to make me happy whenever I think about it.