On the one hand, it is funny that we enjoy the delicious food: such as steaming mutton soup, mellow and juicy beef, fragrant big plate chicken, fat big fish... On the other hand, it is important to get together with my family for chat and play games. I feel love all the time because we care for each other.
On the one hand, it is funny that we enjoy delicious food like steaming mutton soup, mellow and juicy beef, fragrant big plate chicken, and fat big fish. On the other hand, it is important to gather with my family to chat and play games. I feel loved all the time because we care for each other.
(Note: The main correction is the use of "such as" instead of "like" when introducing the list of foods.)
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