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                                                       Dream Trip

       Recently,the issue of dream trip has been widely debated.Which has aroused public attention.There are many kinds of places that i enjoy,such as Shanghai,Sanya and Beijing.From my point of view,the most interesting and important one is Beijing is perfect destination.
       We may cite a variety of reasons accounting for this.To begin with, there are so many scenery spots in Beijing,and that is because this city has a very long history. What's more,it's easier for us to understand that there are so many delicious food in Beijing.Which is because many local snackes can be found there.
       Based on all the reasons that Beijing is a perfect destination.

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Dream Trip

Recently, the issue of dream trips has been widely debated, arousing public attention. There are many places that I enjoy, such as Shanghai, Sanya, and Beijing. From my point of view, Beijing is the most interesting and important destination.

There are various reasons to account for this. Firstly, there are numerous scenic spots in Beijing, owing to its long history. Furthermore, Beijing offers a wide variety of delicious local snacks, which can be found throughout the city.

In conclusion, Beijing is a perfect destination due to its rich history, scenic spots, and plethora of delicious local snacks.

Overall, your essay is concise and makes valid points about why Beijing is a great place to visit. However, there are a few areas where you could improve. Firstly, try to use more natural and varied sentence structures to keep your writing engaging. Secondly, avoid using a list format for your reasons and instead, develop each one into a detailed explanation. Finally, make sure to proofread for minor errors like typos and punctuation mistakes.

Best of luck with your writing!