Dear writer,
Here are some corrections and suggestions for your essay:
1. In the first sentence, it should be "everyone has his or her own choice" instead of "own his or her choice."
2. In the second sentence, "taking the subway is the best way of" needs to be completed with what the subway is the best way of.
3. In the third sentence, you need to add a comma after "First of all." Also, in the first part of the sentence, you should say "more environmentally friendly" instead of "more beneficial to our living environment."
4. In the fourth sentence, "which because there is no traffic jam on the subway" is not grammatically correct. You can use "because there are no traffic jams on the subway, it always arrives on time." Additionally, you can give an example of how long it takes you by subway to get to a place compared to other modes of transportation.
5. In the fifth sentence, it would be better to rephrase "due to it is a public transportation" to "since it is a public transportation."
6. In the sixth sentence, you can mention what kinds of things you like to do to relax on the subway, such as listening to music, reading books, or even people-watching.
7. In the last sentence, you can include a summarization of your reasons for why taking the subway is your favorite method of transportation.
Revised essay:
My Favorite Transportation
Recently, more and more people are talking about their preferred modes of transportation. Everyone has his or her own choice, and in my opinion, taking the subway is the best way of getting around. The reasons for my preference are listed below.
First of all, taking the subway is more environmentally friendly than driving a car. It reduces air pollution and noise pollution, making our city a better place to live. Secondly, the subway saves us time because there are no traffic jams. It always arrives on time, and I can plan my trip accordingly. For example, it only takes me 30 minutes to get to work by subway, while it would take an hour by car during rush hour traffic. Thirdly, since the subway is a public transportation system, it saves me money on gas and parking fees. Lastly, during my commute on the subway, I can relax and unwind by listening to music, reading books, or just observing people.
From the above reasons, you can see that taking the subway is my favorite mode of transportation. It saves time, money, and is better for the environment. Next time you plan to go somewhere, consider taking the subway instead! |
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