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My Hobby
There are many kinds of my hobbies,such as watching TV, reading and swimming.However,I prefer playing basketball rather than others.Although I can't play it very well,but I still show interest in it.
I often play basketball during my free time with my good friends,because it's really a good thing.For one thing,playing basketball can keep you healthy,it's one of many active and effective means to enhance physical health.For another thing,playing basketball is a good way to relax when you confronting with pressure,it can pull you out from depression.Last but not least,playing basketball is easier to make friends while you to take part in basketball's team,because you have the same interest.
All in all,I really get a lot from playing basketball,I sincerely hope you can enjoy this hobby,too.

My Hobby

There are many hobbies I enjoy, such as watching TV, reading, and swimming. However, my favorite hobby is playing basketball. Although I am not very good at it, I still find it interesting.

During my free time, I often play basketball with my good friends because it's a great activity. First, playing basketball can keep you healthy, and it's one of the most active and effective ways to enhance physical health. Second, playing basketball is a good way to relax when dealing with pressure; it can help you escape depression. Finally, playing basketball is an easy way to make new friends when you join a basketball team because you share a common interest.

In conclusion, I've learned a lot from playing basketball, and I sincerely hope that you can also enjoy this hobby.